I remade this poem.....it sucks now lol?

While the word nether bothers me some, the last stanza is actually the best stanza in my opinion and I would have led off with it and built the piece around it. I'd probly turn this into a free verse piece, I'd drop the word beer, it has no impact in this context, I'm OK with Utopia and many of the other passages, but I'd still edit this.